Friday, 14 August 2015

Awesome story beginnings!

Here are some story beginnings from some of our writers.  They have done some great work introducing the characters and settings!!!



Amy was a young girl with long yellow hair.  She wears a short sleeve T Shirt and blue stripy pants with pink socks.  She was a happy and nice girl who loves eating juicy apples.

Amy lived in a grey wooden tree house.  It has lots of books and its hot where she lives.  The sky is always blue and she loves climbing the apple trees.
By Elliyah

Addin lives in a huge rainforest.  He likes climbing trees and he swings on the vines to get from one place to another.  He wears an orange and yellow stripy T Shirt with blue jeans and he absolutely loved to pick apples.  When Addin climbs trees he picks apples and cleans them in the sparkling cold river.  He gets tired quickly, and this is Addins life.
By Jake

Joe was a happy boy who had tiny eyes and huge ears.  He loved the juicy apples that grew nearby but he needed to hunt for them because they are very rare.

Joe lived in a huge tree house and he loved to climb the big apple trees that grew all around.  He sometimes fell down but he was still happy.  Joe never likes to go to the city because of his bad hair cut.
By Oliver

Paul was a small boy who loved to wear his stripy shirt and red pants.  He always went out and put on his pale blue shoes to play.  Paul loved eating pancakes for breakfast.

Paul lived in a small wooden house near a big forest.  He loved walking to the warm lake to have a big swim.  When it was autumn huge orange leaves would fall in his face.
By Rachel

2 comments:

  1. Wow, The story beginnings on the blog were amazing

    Josh R16

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  2. That was great writing Room 16. I love how descriptive it was! From Finn

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